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I'll give your credit for trying.The first 40 seconds I could kinda see it being goodbye but after that it just went loopy.
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Its going my favourites mainly because it sounds AWESOME!
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I could see this being in a flash.You should make some more eh?
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ok....ok... a few things that need improving.You need to change the beat ALOT more, I was only hearing a change near the end, Even then it only lasted a few secs anyway.You also NEED to change that sound and add other things.I mean it sounded like a fart through the whole thing.lol. anyway I hope you use these tips to guide u to other pieces that WILL BLOW MINDS!!!
Author's Response:
Yeah I was thinkin that too. Thanks for the review I really appreciate it, a lot.
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ok it was well OK.I don't know if it was because you were sick or it was the songs you chose but it...well didn't do it for me you know? Most of it was like a skipping CD you know? I'll give you some credit on making it switch songs like that though it was nice. MY RATING: Needs Improving.
P.S. If you could also make it shorter it would've been better.
P.S.S. I hope I didn't insult you, because i wasn't meaning to.
P.S.S.S. If you could give me the list of songs you used it would be good THNX
Author's Response:
cool honesty is always good. i mixed my own songs for my mixtape
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YES! YES! YES! this is the kinda brilliance i wanna hear in music! Mate keep up the BRILLIANT WORK!!! Its going in my favorites.
Author's Response:
^^
Well thank you very much!
I will...
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Theres two things i like about this music, 1 the beginning was good and so was the end. 2: U used bass and drum very professionally. If you want some tips on how to make it better here are some, The middle bit was a bit well.....STUPID.I'm not purposely insulting your music here its just for the kind of instruments your using it goes a bit to fast.Its a shame to because the beginning was absolutely BRILLIANT and so was the ending.The only good that came out of using the fast bit was it was leading up to the ending.Remember these tips because it could help a bundle thnx =D
Author's Response:
thx for the review
i see wat u mean by the middle, and im glad u liked the beggining and the end =D
but the main idea for this song was to have that nice fast bit in the middle... would u agree that i led up alright to it? yea i geuss i didnt make the instruments go too well with the pace, i could change it in some way (eg master it better and slow it down, not too much though, jst becus i rly wanted to have this fast part here)
and as i said, it is my first attempt, so there is always room for improvement =D
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Ok.It was good at first.....BUT i think 5mins is a little to long for a bit of music that repeats the same beat over and over and over and over, it gets boring to tell you the truth.You need to focus on making new beats that meld with the original one so it would sound pretty awesome.If your gonna do something this long PLEASE PLEASE!!! use other instruments or beats, i suggest 2mins max for a song that continuously repeats beats.So I hope my advice helped you a bit for next time.=]
Author's Response:
it was suppost to have lyrics, so it wouldn't seem so repetitive,
but my friend who was going to do the vocals dropped out.
so i just felt i might as well submit it anyway,
if i went through the trouble of making it.
anyway, thanks for the review, and the 6.
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hmmmm.Nice piece of music you got there.Those beats could've been faster and a few more instruments could've been added and sounded better.Keep that in mind for next time when your making a piece of music %u263A%u263A%u263A%u263A
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That was good.I could feel something big was coming because you made the instruments louder and the pace faster, that my friend was an act of professionalism.I could also see that the 1st 35 seconds could of been added in an adventure scene on a movie or flash.Could of done with a bit more instruments but other then that its going in my favorites :D .
Author's Response:
Well, that's nice of you. I'll try to have a better (more complete) version up soon.
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